At 9:22:30 AM EST on Mon Nov 17, 2008 bperil wrote:When I want to input an idea I ought to
not have to care what page that I am on and have the page let me ente content and
the fact that I am entering content
enables a feature that allows me to
collect, edit, order and publish said content.
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At 9:22:56 AM EST on Mon Nov 17, 2008 bperil wrote:Collect, edit, order, and publish |
At 9:23:14 AM EST on Mon Nov 17, 2008 bperil wrote:Content in the Winter World |
At 9:23:24 AM EST on Mon Nov 17, 2008 bperil wrote: |
At 9:30:56 AM EST on Mon Nov 17, 2008 bperil wrote: Those thoughts
covered over with ice
and not having any new ideas
at all
like those forgotten yesterdays
some long forgotten everyday
an a-go around which you'd impulsively
wrap your mind.
All night long at the factory
the steam billows into the valley
ice collects on the railings
the guys' trucks sit in the parkng lot
That mood
is best felt while at work
when you're just getting off of the shift
and in between when you're going from
lunch to the restroom
and you have to walk outside
between the breakroom and the back hall
one night
when the cold's sudden descent
the steam all turned to snow right there
before it got high into the
valley air
and covered over the guys' new trucks
and covered over the withered 5 foot
weed stocks by the chainlink fence in the back
and even though we all know it's still fall
the snow storm covers it all.
Then, there, between the ice slip
and the rail
A frozen mop next to a pail
I thought for an instant of you
and had that feeling, that mood.
Next week
when I visit the city of light on the lake
Maybe I'll be back in a mood best
remembered right there
or maybe letting all of that go
to the lost winds of time
broken cleches that writers
can't use without derision from
other writers. . .
another reason I need the edit features
working
so it's easier to change this page.
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At 9:34:57 AM EST on Mon Nov 17, 2008 bperil wrote: Gosh that last poem could be
lost ruined postings on a windy morning yesterday
lost in the parady of equal and opposite
ruin and made for TV loserly panderings
of pretty girl, handsome boy yesterdays
lonely waiting for coins to be delivered
and no one wanting to share their biscuits.
Her dry mouthed bytings and
not saying this is OK on a morning
when you walked away and that feature
stayed unremade
and made to live within the bounds
of the page
which doesn't care how and if
the posting is sage, oh edit feature
why do you not work
this lazy-boy poem typing is making my
fingers ache on account of the
mouseclicking that I did while playing
the bounce game
and worried that the system
wouldn't run that other new game. . .
And learning all about GL error codes.
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At 9:35:22 AM EST on Mon Nov 17, 2008 bperil wrote:Don't tell me you drank the Iced Tea |
At 9:35:35 AM EST on Mon Nov 17, 2008 bperil wrote: |
At 9:49:18 AM EST on Mon Nov 17, 2008 bperil wrote: Please tell me child
that you didn't really drink
that much iced tea
which, while really good will most likely
make you pee
and we gotta drive an hour so we can
be with mom and we can't stop
cause I'm crazy
and it's saturday
and were driving
up the highway to a funeral
the sun is too bright.
you were just a baby
strapped in
I was crying
but I didn't want you to know
so I tried to hide it
but you gave me that
mommy why are you crying look
and I saw you sobbing even bigger
not understanding mommy's grey funk
when mommy is supposed to be always happy
but you can't be, you can't be.
so can you forgive me for my nicknames for you?
or the way that I tease you when you
giggle like you do
or how I make you do those cute things
for auntie Mamme?
And the stories that I tell about her fame?
When the poet stops saying who he is
does the baby suddenly look away from the weeping?
does the sleepy child in the car seat look
towards the sunlight and the rolling
fields of happy life
off across the mountain valley towns
down below those giant bends in
the highway,
rivers flooding over craigy cliffs
long slopes that slope above
the abysses of waterfall gorges
and then when they stopped at the gorge
she carried the baby across the parking lot.
she brought the baby to the edge of
the abyss
That is the place with the loudest
sound of the rushing water
where the mist is clean as it flows
right out of the mountain
and you can breath it in
and understand the glory and wonder of life and
living without needing words at all
the natural language of babies and infants.
Are waterfalls the weeping world of
life and the earth crying?
she wonders this as the baby coos.
using words
What does baby say or do when baby makes
first words? What does baby
mean when baby makes first words?
She been standing there for a while,
little child wide eyed wonder at
the rushing flood of life and
living Vermont water
Baby at the brink of falling in and
mist on mommy's face not tears but
exploding waterfall of life, that
pouring out and free for every wanderer
(free for all comers)
Sad funerals later and many days
coming back through the same highway
and aware of the power of the light
and flooding water she
stops again and carries little child back to
the place of flooding life
and baby, there,
a name?
a description of a place?
a random placement of first words?
words where none had been ever heard before
from baby:
"mommy
waterfall"
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At 9:54:00 AM EST on Mon Nov 17, 2008 bperil wrote:When I want to input an
idea I ought to be able
to do this where ever I am
have my own place for those ideas
that fllod forth from the clifface of
my living and walking around.
Just file them right here in your head
no need to be writing them all down
cause no one wants to hear it anyway
do they?
your rattling on,
your tottal and continuous
sputter forth of poem-trivances.
Dark voice of doubt from
hurting fingers asks me why
I waste my time with poems and
automatic garbage when I could be
writing my heavy edit code that I want?
So son why do you do these endless poem-rambles?
A lot of which leads tired eyes of readers
into brambles
(of thought)?
If you fall into the prickered bush
you'll hear your blow-up going whoosh
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At 9:54:23 AM EST on Mon Nov 17, 2008 bperil wrote:I'm from Vermon'
I do what I wan' |